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mark ledson's Vector Art Gallery
F28P
F28P - mark ledson
Factory 28 Productions
UK (Northwest)
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Description
This is my first time using illustrator, its part of my college work done in the last two weeks. Please feel free and let me know what you think i would be grateful. Cheers
Application
Illustrator
Labels
Fantasy, Realistic, Science Fiction
Times Viewed
1665
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jamdesigns
29 April 2007 - 17:44
Conversation With jamdesigns
I think it's good but I feel it would be more apealing if your gradient blends looked a little more matalic.But it's a good design!
30 April 2007 - 04:03: mark ledson (F28P) replied...
Thanks, for the project we had to pick a chrome/matalic object and come up with something, so a matalic-ish robot it was, glad you like the design cheers
1 May 2007 - 00:12: jamdesigns replied...
No problem! I love to help.
jgreene777
30 April 2007 - 08:48
Conversation With Jimmy Greene (jgreene777)
a few of the objects have outlines. it would look a little more realistic without them. i get a little lost in the fore shoulder and collar bone area, i think because of all the "parts" and joints that would make them up.

the forward shin, the top of the hip and the heel on the back foot look really nice. i think you nailed the metallic look on those parts. the shadows are great and the diagonal horizon really make the piece, overall, more dynamic.

great job for your first illustrator piece.
30 April 2007 - 09:28: mark ledson (F28P) replied...
thanks for the advice, i know want you mean about the outlines. I wanted the diagonal horizon to like a hill so the robot would look tired and need recharging ie title "recharge" looking forward to using illustrator again
Husker
30 April 2007 - 22:30
Conversation With Jerry Mills (Husker)
I think the bot looks awesome. My only crit would be the background and lettering could be a little more complimentary to the piece. It kind of looks like it was an afterthought.
1 May 2007 - 05:25: mark ledson (F28P) replied...
I wanted the background plain because i did not want it to take anything away from the bot,thanks for the crit
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